Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2021 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely start to the story. Only point I want to make is that it is very unlikely that a snow plough will be in a Surrey street in December or at any time! A small point and it didn’t detract from the excellent story.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Sep 2021 9:56 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I like your female Harry, she seems very in character and well rounded. I really enjoyed reading from Snape's POV.

    I'm really worried about the frost bite though. Is that going to heal? On her fingers. They might not.

    I wish Snape had wrapped her in his coat or his body heat. Harriet is no doubt anemic. Poor kid, she clearly needs help.

    I loved the start! The chapter length was glorious!

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