Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 03 Mar 2022 1:09 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Very fun! I’m looking forward to seeing what constitutes “good behavior “ for Snape.

    Author's Response: Thanks! tbh I'm not really sure what Snape would count as good behaviour for Harry, he's so invested in seeing the worst of him.
Title: Chapter 1 17 Nov 2021 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Dang, Snape is merciless. Harry deserved it though. Snape probably sees it as forcing Harry to stay out of trouble. I’m glad Harry didn’t have any lasting effects from all the terrible hexes “Moody” cast. He’s lucky he just took a day to recover!

    I love the idea and premise of Harry not being able to sneak around due to a little bell or something. Just how did Snape end up having it on his person? Or did he conjure it?

    I’m enjoying this story so far and would love to read more! Please update when you can. :)

    Author's Response: Hi Jan! The next chapter is in the works at the moment, I'm just having some difficulty writing it in a way that will let me wrap the story up in not too many chapters (I have too many on the go!). And though it is a very amusing image to think of Snape just carrying round a little collar with a bell on it, he actually just used a charm which conjures one up. But now you have made me wonder what might make him carry one round with him... Thanks for your review, and I just wanted to say that I have read your story Muggleville a lot (really a lot), and think it's really great, so your comment has made me go all warm and fuzzy :)
Title: Chapter 1 11 Nov 2021 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    What fun, I hope Harry learns his lesson

    Author's Response: We shall see... but I wouldn't hold my hopes up if I were you. It is Harry after all.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Nov 2021 10:35 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent details of Harry's disorientation as he tried to regain consciousness, flashing back to Privet Drive! It'll be interesting to see how the story develops, what Snape has in mind for Harry to prove that he will behave (as if!!!). I'd like more of a description of the cat collar charm--it seems to be a physical item (given that Harry wrenched at it), but size, shape, material, color(?), would be helpful. Also, if it's a charm, is magic involved? Great idea, but I think your audience would relish more details about how this contraption actually works. (...hoping Snape didn't employ some sort of magical choke collar to control our fave Gryffindor...)

    Author's Response: Hi! Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your story 'Marge's Boyfriend'...and thank you for reviewing. The next chapter should have more details about the charm-- and yes, it is pretty much just an actual cat-collar with a jingly bell on it, except Harry can't remove it himself. I'm glad you prompted me on describing it more in the second chapter because I wrote that first chapter so long ago the image of it has just been in my head for ages, so thanks :)
Title: Chapter 1 10 Nov 2021 5:52 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    love it!! everyone will now now when Harry is in the area now!!

    Author's Response: That's saying the least of it-- when I post the next chapter you'll be able to see just how annoying it is... Thanks for the review :)

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