I like the modification to the collar. It feels much more palatable now!
Author's Response: Yay! I don't think Snape really thought it through when he put the collar on Harry, but he didn't want to back down completely. It's still pretty invasive but I do agree that its much better this way.
Harry should just go out and prank Snape just to show him what Harry would actually be like of he was a trouble maker. At least HE doesn't sabotage other potions like the Slytherins like Malfoy do all of the time.
Author's Response: Hmm maybe-- though that wouldn't really work with the plot I've got worked out so far, where the ending wouldn't have as much impact if Harry was being a trouble maker. Maybe in another story.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 28 Nov 2021 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter, however if it fourth year surely Percy will be at the ministry
Author's Response: ... gah of course wow I don't know how I missed that, usually I'm pretty good at keeping my timelines straight. Thanks for letting me know, though I really don't know who I could put in instead, guess I might have to make up a prefect. And I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
I am enjoying your story. It totally made my day. I can’t wait to see what happens next. =0)
Author's Response: Thank you for such a short and sweet review :) Must admit, though, haven't written very much more of this story at this point, mostly because I want to finish it up in a few chapters and this means doing some good hard plotting to get a natural end-point. So it's mostly vague outlines and random sentences right now heh heh heh... but I do want to get it done by the end of summer-- which might be the end of winter for you, I suppose, if you live in the Northern Hemisphere. Gosh, I don't know what it is about this site but it makes my review responses all rambly. But anyway, thanks again!
Oh, man!!! Poor, poor Harry!!! And everyone else in earshot! Lovely descriptive details throughout! Especially loved the reindeer reference--great for the upcoming season! (btw, thanks for the "Marge" feedback!)
Author's Response: I must admit that one of my pleasures in life is torturing my fictional characters... and that reference is probably about as Christmassy as this story is going to get, because it wasn't written with the holiday season in mind. All my Christmas spirit is going into Shatter, this year, I suppose, so there is very little left over for this one :)
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