Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 4 02 Dec 2023 5:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an amazing chapter. I love how such a small turn of events will lead to such big changes. The dialogue at the end was riveting. Thanks so much for continuing your story!
Title: Chapter 4 08 Nov 2023 12:54 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Yikes!! Poor Harry. you did a good job showing his immaturity and naivety. Snape is not holding back. Dumbledore seems to want to treat Harry as a child. Interesting contrast of characters.

    I liked how Harry suggested they call Dobby and Snape did. Everything comes out much faster when people are telling the truth and listening to each other.

    I enjoyed this chapter. The characterizations and development were spot on.

Title: Chapter 4 14 Aug 2023 3:33 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    More, more! Please???
Title: Chapter 4 14 Aug 2023 3:33 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    More, more! Please???
Title: Chapter 4 10 Jul 2023 9:48 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so hoping you come back to this when you can.
Title: Chapter 4 25 Aug 2022 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    Like the point Severus made concerning Harry, but stated more gentle way! I know that not Severus's way!! Overall great office scene...
Title: Chapter 4 20 Mar 2022 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent tension and writing thank you

    Author's Response: aaw thanks! I'm glad the tension came across well
Title: Chapter 4 17 Mar 2022 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Wejee (Signed) [Report This]
    I Really loved this chapter!! sue me but I really like caring Dumbledore and this chapter here really shows how much he cares for the boy T^T… and I also understand where Snapes come from, he is really afraid for Harry and wants to drive in the point no matter what .. I can’t wait for more…

    Is there any chance you’ll be writing longer stories? because you have such smooth and unique way of writing, plus your Snape feels true to his canon character yet folds better, and you didn’t make Albus an asshole which is something I truly appreciate and suffice to say harry is wonderful .

    Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it, I had a great deal of fun writing this chapter. Snape and Harry and Dumbledore all in a room together is always an interesting dynamic. Longer stories... hmm... when I first started writing fanfiction a few years ago I did plan out longer-ish ones in my head (The Hogwarts Quartet and Tailor-Made, both on ff.net), but I found it hard to keep up the energy/motivation for them after a while, so they are still unfinished. It's tricky because I do want to finish them but my writing style has changed just enough that reading them back feels v odd. Also I must admit that I am not the best at plotting so find it easier to write a story that I have a clear idea of where it is going, which was not so much the case for those longer ones. I just have so many unfinished stories that it's a relief to write the shorter ones and finish them, I suppose... I don't want to start posting ones that I won't be able to finish. Okay so that was a longwinded answer... basically... maybe, maybe not?

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