| Title: Chapter 8
| 20 Jun 2023 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, Severus is being completely unfair and thanks to his upbringing Harry doesn’t know how to react. Thank you for showing this so clearly and well in your story. I love how the griffindors are helping him.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 20 Jun 2023 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: jeh (Signed)
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This is a great story, but I wouldn't wait too much longer for Snape to realize that he is bullying a student that needs his help. I've read a number of stories that begin with bullying Snape before he transitions to helping Harry. That can be a tough balance. At a certain point, his redemption isn't believable anymore and his character remains too unlikable. Love this so far though.
Your story so far is just: Wow! I enjoy reading it a lot. You’re really good with writing about Harry’s internal thoughts and feelings, I like that a lot. Also, I can understand Harry’s sense of not belonging anywhere well. Poor guy! And Snape’s just too stupid to open his eyes and see what’s right before his overgrown nose. Maybe you can tell that he makes me very angry ;)
I like how you write Harry as a Slytherin in your story. Many stories in which Harry is sorted into Slytherin just don’t catch his Slytherin personality very well but you do it seemingly effortlessly.
Thank you for your terrific story!
Oh, my.
This makes my heart hurt.
Aw :( That was a sad chapter. My heart breaks for poor Harry.
I hope Snape sees reality soon. Poor Harry. A frustrating but well written chapter
Snape is so obtuse! I wonder when he’ll see reason. Thanks for the update.
Aww. Poor Harry. Snape is so blind!!
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