The divide is bridged. I love it.
Oh my goodness, what a chapter. Several dynamics just changed and it’ll be fun to see how this all plays out.
Thanks for another great chapter.
My heart goes out to Draco. Your descriptions are so alive that they pull me right in.
I love the parallel here to an earlier chapter when Snape caught Harry out of bed. What a beautiful contrast. The last line of the chapter was hauntingly beautiful, vulnerable, and real.
I love the literary references and parallels that lend deeper insight into your characters struggles.
I love seeing the interactions between Draco and Snape’s outer facades, knowing the vulnerability and truth of their feelings hidden beneath. I hope they can break through those soon, so Draco can get the help and understanding he needs.
Saturnine is such a well developed character, and it’s such a pleasure to read about her. I’m so glad she was there to help Harry out of the pinch he was in.
Great cliffhanger ending to another great chapter
So excited to be jumping into part 2 of your excellent story.
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