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Title: Chapter 3 23 Feb 2022 10:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. The irony is that poor Harry is feeling unwanted and Severus is just trying to protect him. You have shown it so clearly without spelling it out.
Title: Chapter 3 23 Feb 2022 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. The irony is that poor Harry is feeling unwanted and Severus is just trying to protect him. You have shown it so clearly without spelling it out.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Feb 2022 8:26 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for this great update! I really enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Snape.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Feb 2022 6:05 pm
Reviewer: TheBestHorcrux (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh thank goodness you updated! I was refreshing the page everyday waiting for this. You write their characters very naturally it doesn't seem forced or anything. Can't wait for chapter 4!!
Title: Chapter 3 20 Feb 2022 12:27 pm
Reviewer: Gryphonia (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited when I saw this updated today! I am so happy to read this! Good job! I very much enjoyed the Snape/Harry talk; it is so cute that Snape suggested that Harry was welcome to stay with him past 17 and poor Harry didn't expect it. :) I am waiting for the new chapter with baited breath!

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