| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 Jul 2022 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting and tense chapter
Hi! I would just like to say that the magic and emotions that rise from this fanfiction never cease to amaze me, no matter how often I've read it. I still found myself captured in this AU that you've created. I hope you see this review, and know that this fanfiction is high on my list of favourite fanfics I've read.
Please write if there is any hope that you will continue to write? It's been three months since the last chapter. I am losing hope for a sequel.
This is not really a comment on your story so much as a comment on you as a writer. I LOVE your stories. But I like to read them on my Kindle. I have not found a program yet that will work from potions and snitches. Can you post your stuff on AO3 or fanfiction.net?
I love where this fic is going and can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 01 May 2022 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear, I’m sure something is going Togo wrong with Harry’s plan!
Thank you for updating your wonderful story.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 23 Feb 2022 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter. The irony is that poor Harry is feeling unwanted and Severus is just trying to protect him. You have shown it so clearly without spelling it out.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 23 Feb 2022 10:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter. The irony is that poor Harry is feeling unwanted and Severus is just trying to protect him. You have shown it so clearly without spelling it out.
Thanks for this great update! I really enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Snape.
Oh thank goodness you updated! I was refreshing the page everyday waiting for this. You write their characters very naturally it doesn't seem forced or anything. Can't wait for chapter 4!!
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