Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you
| Title: Chapter 9
| 21 Jun 2022 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I enjoyed the explanation nearly as much as the chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad, I find things often sound better and clearer in my head than they do when I try to write it down or explain things so that's good to know
love severus is visiting a mind healer! past chapters: like hermione and harry will be is guardians, and professors and poppy will assisted them!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I know it's not necessarily the most pleasant thing for anyone to go through but I think it will be better for him to start treatment now when he's still young with a healer who is used to working with children so he can begin to heal. I think they will be good guardians and extended family, and regardless what happens with relationships Hermione will still play a big part as one of his guardians/parent figures
| Title: Chapter 8
| 15 Jun 2022 10:31 am
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Poor Severus a horrible procedure. Thank you a well thought out chapter
Author's Response: Yes indeed but things will start getting better for him on that front
| Title: Chapter 7
| 13 Jun 2022 7:00 pm
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Lovely chapter, I think you portrayed Neville’s uncertainties very well. It must be hard for him to have all his memories of the last year as well as his time in potions to overcome. He is like Harry a kind forgiving child.
I love Luna and her pronouncements are always good and you have her so well. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked my portrayal of Neville and of Luna, I did find her more challenging to portray her. I think Neville comes around quickly listening to Harry and realises that Severus is nothing like the man who intimidated and bullied him for the past seven years, it may take longer but I think he'll come to see that Professor Snape was also not all he seemed
This is an interesting course of action. I’m looking forward to the big reveal coming up.
Author's Response: Thanks, all will be revealed soon
Thanks for the sweet chapter. That was a nice healing moment with Neville. The plot thickened at the end and, while I think I understand what’s happening with the dreams, I’m looking forward to finding out for sure in the chapters ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you. glad you liked Severuis and Neville starting over, he's nott he ost obvious character to include but I think he's a good choice. I won't say anything more about the dreams otherwise I'm likely to give away the plot away with unsubtle hints but all will be revealed soon, the next chapter's kind of setting up for it so hope it doesn't disappoint.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 04 Jun 2022 8:19 pm
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Wonderful description of the toy shop and all it contains thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, what could be more fun than exploring a toy shop and a magical one at that
| Title: Chapter 5
| 03 Jun 2022 3:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I loved Minerva’s attitude and the way Severus examined the potion, so cute.
Author's Response: Thanks, I couldn't resist having some fun and an instinctive over-reaction on her part and trying to show how even at that young age he still retains a bit of his old potions master self perhaps from his former life or perhaps just what he's been taught from his Mum or a bit of both and he knows better than just to accept potions without question
Thanks for the fun chapter. The shopping expedition was a treat.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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