| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 May 2022 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic chapter thank you
| Title: Prologue
| 17 May 2022 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting start to the story thank you
I’m interested to see how Ron will react. It’s nice that Harry and Severus are both embracing their newfound relationship. If Oracles are so much more accurate and dependable than seers, I wonder if this particular Oracle is in danger from the dark lord.
Your description of the Oracle was very nice. They have lots to go on now.
I like how Severus is stepping into a father role, and am looking forward to seeing what happens when the glamor falls away. The inclusion of an Oracle is interesting and I’m looking forward to learning more.
I appreciated the back story and the questions that were answered. I’m also glad that McGonagall gave Dumbledore a piece of her mind.
Oh, what a serious betrayal of trust. I hope that Severus and Harry can make the most of things.
I am so happy that this was updated. I checked every day to see if there was an update. I love this story!
I'm worried how Ron will react, but Harry has Hermione and his father and Godfather. He'll handle what comes at him. I'm also curious about his change. I can't wait to see what happens!
Intriguing start! I’m looking forward to reading your story.
Amazing start. I can’t wait to see where this goes!
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