I'm really enjoying seeing Severus interacting with a new character! But the clifftop scene description blew me away. I'd only ever seen pics of the White Cliffs in broad daylight, so I decided to Google images of them at sunset and sunrise -- WOW!!! I suppose people expect to see the cliffs WHITE, but the way the chalk and the sea capture the colored light... well, it's surprising that I'd never even thought about the edges of the day! Thank you for inspiring a wonderfully "enlightening" experience! Hmm... Now wondering if there are pics of the Cliffs under a full moon. *goes to see...*
| Title: Chapter 9 - A World of Dreams and Nightmares
| 28 Aug 2022 11:46 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is a moment we’ve been waiting for, indeed! I loved the pancake scene, and the way that Severus took the time to really find out more about Harry’s past.
| Title: Chapter 8 - A Dark and Stormy Night
| 28 Aug 2022 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter! I like how Harry handled the challenging information. The class descriptions and Harry’s selections were fun too.
| Title: Chapter 9 - A World of Dreams and Nightmares
| 27 Aug 2022 8:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed)
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This. This is the moment in the story I've been waiting for. And now we wait and see what the fallout will be from this discovery.
Sev knows now, everyone better run for the hills…
| Title: Chapter 8 - A Dark and Stormy Night
| 26 Aug 2022 8:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely discussion about classes, why didn’t they have that in cannon? Thank you I love these three as a group/family
Super good! I like Harry’s extracurricular choices this time!
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Game of Chess and Questions
| 25 Aug 2022 10:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I don’t think I’ve read such a good description of Severus explaining about his past in fan fiction before.
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Game of Chess and Questions
| 23 Aug 2022 12:35 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a riveting and emotional chapter. I’m so glad that there’s more of your story ahead!
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