| Title: Chapter 11 - Chicken Soup for the Soul
| 10 Sep 2022 11:22 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The medical scene was fun! It’s nice that Severus is being gentle with Harry. I hope he and Emmeline can reignite their flame soon!
| Title: Chapter 10 - A Light in the Darkness
| 10 Sep 2022 11:12 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Harry’s conversation with Emmeline was enlightening. Kids have a way of innocently drawing out difficult discussions with adults. I’m glad that Severus had a talk with Harry.
Excellent! I love the subtle hints of connections between Harry and Sev.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Chicken Soup for the Soul
| 06 Sep 2022 2:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely fuzzy chapter.
| Title: Chapter 10 - A Light in the Darkness
| 29 Aug 2022 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I loved the contrast between the happiness Harry has with the horror of the past.
| Title: Chapter 9 - A World of Dreams and Nightmares
| 29 Aug 2022 6:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I hope Emmeline and Severus sort out their problems. Love the hippocampus.
I'm really enjoying seeing Severus interacting with a new character! But the clifftop scene description blew me away. I'd only ever seen pics of the White Cliffs in broad daylight, so I decided to Google images of them at sunset and sunrise -- WOW!!! I suppose people expect to see the cliffs WHITE, but the way the chalk and the sea capture the colored light... well, it's surprising that I'd never even thought about the edges of the day! Thank you for inspiring a wonderfully "enlightening" experience! Hmm... Now wondering if there are pics of the Cliffs under a full moon. *goes to see...*
| Title: Chapter 9 - A World of Dreams and Nightmares
| 28 Aug 2022 11:46 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is a moment we’ve been waiting for, indeed! I loved the pancake scene, and the way that Severus took the time to really find out more about Harry’s past.
| Title: Chapter 8 - A Dark and Stormy Night
| 28 Aug 2022 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter! I like how Harry handled the challenging information. The class descriptions and Harry’s selections were fun too.
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