Loved this angsty chapter. It seems than Snape and Harry seem to anger and then avoid each other until the other has to be there for them in some sort of way. I'd like to find out more about the story with the second cousin - it sounds like there's more to it.
Author's Response: There might be more to it, yes...Thank you for reviewing!
i loved it!
Author's Response: So glad that you did!
| Title: Chapter 3 The Campaign
| 05 Nov 2022 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Prrelon (Signed)
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Really Nice chapter
Author's Response: Great, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 18 Renervations
| 01 Nov 2022 8:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very tense and angst chapter. I imagine Severus will have a lot to say to Harry.
Thank you again for your wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so faithfully, I'm so glad you enjoy the story!
| Title: Chapter 17 The Cave
| 28 Oct 2022 3:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter thank you. Severus and Harry seem not to be able to be in the same room before they start arguing. I think you should shut them up in a room to sort themselves out, without wands!
Thank you for updating.
| Title: Chapter 16 The Un-Doing
| 26 Oct 2022 7:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely moment when Frank recognised his mother. Thank you I love how you are developing the relationship between Harry and Severus. Thank you
Author's Response: Thanks! The tragedy of the Longbottom family is almost as sad as that of the Potters and it felt good to be able to show that in a way in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! The tragedy of the Longbottom family is almost as sad as that of the Potters and it felt good to be able to show that in a way in this chapter.
An emotional and well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Writing about Neville having his parents back after all that time was very emotional.
| Title: Chapter 15 Reckless
| 20 Oct 2022 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for the update. You describe the secrecy and the behaviour so well. Poor Harry I hope life picks up soon for him
| Title: Chapter 14 Miserable
| 16 Oct 2022 6:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear Harry is a right mess, Severus needs th sort him out!
Thank you for an excellent chapter
Author's Response: You are so right, but it will take a little while, however. Thank you for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 13 The New Millennium
| 16 Oct 2022 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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The vision of Severus in stocking feet in the snow was very funny. Poor Harry he is in a bad way and needs help. Thank you a great chapter.
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