Wow! I'm so pleased that you responded to my Challenge! (I wasn't sure that anyone actually would... 😁) I love this opening -- a coming-of-age watch is so personal, I can understand Snape's obsession with getting it back. Now comes the fun part: waiting/watching to see how he goes about doing so! And I'll leave that entirely up to you (*wink*). [My only question right now concerns your 5th Year Defense class: the 1996 fall term and the fact that Harry has already earned an OWL in DADA would indicate that this is actually 6th year, right?] Please keep writing -- am loving the POV you've chosen, letting us inside Snape's head, making it ultra-personal, which works really well for this story. Many thanks for responding to my Challenge!
Author's Response: I thought I changed it to sixth year. Whoops.
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