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Title: Draco Malfoy 26 Oct 2022 9:11 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m getting boring I know but please split the conversation with a new line for every speaker, it will make it easier to read and you will soon do it automatically!

    Author's Response: working on it. Thanks for the feedback. I find it better helps improve my writing.
Title: The Dursleys 26 Oct 2022 9:08 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Much better with the paragraphs thank you.
    I still think that you should correct the speech format.
    Sorry to be so fussy but it will improve your writing and you have such good ideas!

    Author's Response: Did it, and it's okay to be fussy. You're actually helping me improve my writing.
Title: The Dursleys 24 Oct 2022 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    This has good points but to read it is hard. You need to use paragraphs and whenever a new speaker talks a new line should be used so your readers can understand what is happening.

    Author's Response: I will correct this.

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