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Author's Response: working on it. Thanks for the feedback. I find it better helps improve my writing.
I still think that you should correct the speech format. Sorry to be so fussy but it will improve your writing and you have such good ideas! Author's Response: Did it, and it's okay to be fussy. You're actually helping me improve my writing.
Author's Response: I will correct this. |
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