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Reviews For Forbidden Secrets
The only improvement I can suggest is to watch and make sure all the names are capitalized. You had a harry in there instead of Harry, and professor Snape instead of Professor Snape. The chapters are short, but that is okay when stories are updated quickly. It would be nice to have more details given as well. Thanks for writing and sharing this new story! I'm really enjoying it. I'd love to read more! Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism. I like this site, because the authors on here are so polite about it.
Formatting can come later, but for now, try to become more expansive in your writing. Tell the story you want to tell and you want people to remember. Author's Response: Thanks! |
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