I absolutely ADORED this, esp the first chapter. Can not wait for the sequel!!!
This was amazing, I can't wait to read the sequel! Your characterization of Snape is so unique and interesting, I love it! He's still young and seems a bit irresponsible at times, but has also lived an eventful life so far and has many stories to tell of it.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 30 Nov 2022 4:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for this story. I love you rock mad Severus and Harry is a delight. Rather worried about them going home now Yax and co know Harry is there but I’m sure you’ll have a great sequel worked out. Can’t wait to read it!
I love when things get out of Severus' control but he rolls with it. Sooooooo Slytherin.
Nice portrayal of Harry’s confusion and gradual understanding. Looking forward to the sequel!
I really enjoyed your short tale! That was quite an adventurous chapter with some unsavory characters that dripped with evil. I loved the last line of your story, and am excited to read your sequel. Hats off for writing this and the sequel, while caring for your baby. Thanks again for your story, and I’m looking forward to what’s ahead!
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