I love the addition of Tagalog and the history you share about the real Rice Bowl! Your Snape is unique and well done. Thanks for the nice update.
interesting story n premise so far, cannot wait to read more!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 12 Nov 2022 9:58 pm
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Thank you I loved seeing Severus dealing with the nurses and doctors
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Nov 2022 9:25 pm
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Love this story. You give so much detail and the way you get into Harry’s mind is wonderful thank you
Since there isn’t a kudos button on P and S, I will just say kudos on this chapter. Harry must be so confused by Snape’s behavior. Hopefully Snape will clue him into magic soon. I had to google Steve Vai too and I see the resemblance.
Nicely written interaction between Harry and Severus.
The driving bit is funny! Sadly, I had to look up Steve Vai, but he’s spot on Snape. Thanks for the great update, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your story develops from here.
This story is awesome! I love your characterization of Snape and Harry. Your writing is superb, filled with rich detail and humor. Thanks so much for posting here. I’m looking forward to reading on!
me ha encantado, espero con ansias el siguiente. Escribes muy bien.
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