Eesh, good descriptions. Having umbridge as a pervading presence is good too, we can feel the frustration that she is around every corner
What a harrowing experience for Harry, and an action-packed read for us. I let out a huge breath at the chapter’s end. I’m glad that Snape responded with compassion. It’s a relief that Snape knows about Umbridge harassing Harry. Hopefully, he can do something about that soon. I also wonder if the Felix potion will make an appearance! Thanks for this wonderful update!
| Title: A Run Of Bad Luck
| 17 Nov 2022 3:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear poor Harry. At least Severus was kind to him as he healed him.
WOW un capítulo genial, sigue pronto, me ha encantado y estoy deseando saber cómo progresa esa relación entre los dos.
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