Its a shame the way snape keeps trying to help and getting it wrong. Its an interesting way to introduce conflicts without harry breaking Snape’s rules
Nicely written different perspectives on forcing Harry to move.
Nicely written different perspectives on forcing Harry to move.
| Title: Conspiring Against Happiness
| 04 Dec 2022 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry! I had a lump in my throat when he felt so alone and lonely. I wonder if Severus really thought about what he was doing to him, or if, as usual he just thought the worst of him, and reacted out of habit. Thank you for updating
| Title: Conspiring Against Happiness
| 04 Dec 2022 4:13 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The chapter title is aptly named. I could feel Harry’s despair at the many events that have built up, conspiring against him. I wonder if something will happen to cause Snape’s current view of Harry and his role as guardian to come crashing down around his ears. I am certainly hoping so, as Snape seems to be really failing Harry on an emotional level right now and a physical one, in terms of his safety at Privet Drive. I really liked the chapter and especially appreciated how Harry’s friends have stayed true through these rough times. I hope the change in Harry’s circumstances at the end will have a positive impact on him, and not the exact opposite effect. Thanks for this great update, and for the haunting new visual with the umbra shade!
Me encanta! Me parece muy interesante la dinámica entre Harry y Snape ahora, Snape intenta hacer las cosas bien pero solo consigue empeorar la situación para Harry :( espero que se dé cuenta de lo que hace y de lo que de verdad necesita Harry y su situación familiar
As always, a great chapter!
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