I’m incensed by Snape’s unilateral decision-making! I understand his reasoning in this instance (and it certainly makes sense), but how can he not have at least asked for Harry’s opinion. I feel like you’ve set the situation up nicely for a Christmas show down, where Snape is hopefully disabused of his erroneous assumptions about Harry’s life. Thanks for the images. I appreciated seeing the prefect apprentice badge, and could see Harry’s loneliness in the image by the fire. Thanks so much for updating, and I’m looking forward to seeing how the holidays unfold.
Oh no! Harry CAN'T go home for Christmas!!! That's horrible. He and Snape need to figure out how to communicate better...
Oh no! Harry CAN'T go home for Christmas!!! That's horrible. He and Snape need to figure out how to communicate better...
Por favor sigue pronto, me ha encantado este capítulo y estoy deseando ver qué pasa con Harry y Vernon y si Snape se dará cuenta del terrible error que está cometiendo
Nicely written different perspectives on forcing Harry to move.
Nicely written different perspectives on forcing Harry to move.
| Title: Conspiring Against Happiness
| 04 Dec 2022 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry! I had a lump in my throat when he felt so alone and lonely. I wonder if Severus really thought about what he was doing to him, or if, as usual he just thought the worst of him, and reacted out of habit. Thank you for updating
| Title: Conspiring Against Happiness
| 04 Dec 2022 4:13 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The chapter title is aptly named. I could feel Harry’s despair at the many events that have built up, conspiring against him. I wonder if something will happen to cause Snape’s current view of Harry and his role as guardian to come crashing down around his ears. I am certainly hoping so, as Snape seems to be really failing Harry on an emotional level right now and a physical one, in terms of his safety at Privet Drive. I really liked the chapter and especially appreciated how Harry’s friends have stayed true through these rough times. I hope the change in Harry’s circumstances at the end will have a positive impact on him, and not the exact opposite effect. Thanks for this great update, and for the haunting new visual with the umbra shade!
Me encanta! Me parece muy interesante la dinámica entre Harry y Snape ahora, Snape intenta hacer las cosas bien pero solo consigue empeorar la situación para Harry :( espero que se dé cuenta de lo que hace y de lo que de verdad necesita Harry y su situación familiar
As always, a great chapter!
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