What a cool experience for Harry! That was so much fun to read. The whole thing was intriguing and unique. Writing this chapter into the wee hours of the morning must have been good inspiration for the scene. I hope that Harry gets hooked on potions through experiences like this, and his other collecting experience. I’m really enjoying your story. Thanks for this super fun update!
| Title: Student Apprentice
| 21 Nov 2022 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this chapter. Plus, I really enjoyed the image. That is one thing I’ve always enjoyed about your stories. I like that you add images to them for us to be able to see what you’re seeing.
Ah, so I've finally hit the latest installment after binge reading! I'm glad to see this is recent so I'm hopeful to come back for more soon! Some of the classwork/brewing is too detailed for me, so I skip it too get the main plot. But overall I'm enjoying this. And maybe if I read only one chapter a day the detail would be fine. It's hard to get thru it your binge reading, lol!
Thanks for the great update and the lovely images! I hope that Harry has learned to ask for help now, which will hopefully carry over to other contexts. That’s a big hurdle to overcome. Neville’s companionship and Dean’s compassion were bright rays of light in the grey of Harry’s life right now. Those gloves and their origin were a bright spot as well. Thanks again for this update, I’m looking forward to what’s ahead!
| Title: Illicit Activities
| 18 Nov 2022 2:49 am
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| Reviewer: raidyn (Signed)
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absolutely loving this lol
What a harrowing experience for Harry, and an action-packed read for us. I let out a huge breath at the chapter’s end. I’m glad that Snape responded with compassion. It’s a relief that Snape knows about Umbridge harassing Harry. Hopefully, he can do something about that soon. I also wonder if the Felix potion will make an appearance! Thanks for this wonderful update!
| Title: A Run Of Bad Luck
| 17 Nov 2022 3:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear poor Harry. At least Severus was kind to him as he healed him.
| Title: Illicit Activities
| 17 Nov 2022 3:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very enlightening chapter. I can’t believe that Severus isn’t putting together all the clues he has to see how Harry’s family treat him. He’s supposed to be an intelligent man
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