Lol, que suerte la mía. 🤭 Acababa de leer el capítulo 12* justo cuando subes los otros.
Por cierto, está es una gran historia, me tienes pegada al teléfono esperando actualización y releyendo los capítulos.
Ahh no! I caught up. Lovely story and can't wait for the next update.
I don't ind the descriptions as it adds a depth to the overall story.
| Title: A Chance Encounter On Diagon Alley
| 16 Nov 2022 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed)
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Omg, the end of this is freaking fantastic. I koved that Snape/Vernon interaction.
This story is great so far!
I’m surprised Snape doesn’t tell the Hufflepuffs off for having an unauthorized pin on their school uniform. Hermione wasn’t happy in cannon when Harry did better than her in potions, but is taking it much better now that there’s a legitimate reason for his success.
| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 15 Nov 2022 3:30 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Interesting description of how the tests work. I like how Harry handled Umbridge. The Hufflepuff’s reaction to Harry was well written and an angle I hadn’t thought of.
| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 15 Nov 2022 3:17 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Harry just doesn’t realize what Snape is doing for him - all he can focus on is the past. When he does see what is happening, his attitude will change.
Nice illustration!
I’m really enjoying your descriptions of the potions aspects. It immerses us in Harry’s reality. There’s also great enjoyment in seeing Harry excel in an area he has historically struggled with (especially in Snape’s domain of expertise). Harry’s playing a clever, but dangerous, game in DADA by engaging instead of keeping his head down. I hope his strategy doesn’t backfire! It’s striking that he has to pretend again in that classroom, as his need to pretend has been a recurring theme in your story. I’m looking forward to the point where he can simply be real with Snape about all aspects of his life and not have to pretend. I hope that Harry starts that process by at least engaging with Snape on the social turbulence he’s currently facing. Thanks for sharing your Bingo card document - I’m so impressed!
I like the descriptive aspect of the potions! It makes the story feel more real and filled out. Loving this new story by the way
| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 14 Nov 2022 6:43 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed)
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Shame on Seamus!!! And that other jerk -- that's carrying the concept of Hufflepuff loyalty to an unprecedented extreme. My jaw dropped soooo far... Poor Harry. He may well end up living in the book nook, if that's what he'll have to contend with this year. But accolades to his "Slytherin" circumnavigation of Umbridge's baiting. Am wondering if Harry will eventually turn to Snape for guidance...
| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 14 Nov 2022 6:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting defence lesson! Poor Harry he doesn’t get a break does he!
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