| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 14 Nov 2022 3:29 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the swift update! Harry’s in a tough spot with his peers. I hope the apprenticeship gives him some needed structure, focus, and hopefully support through the challenging times ahead. Harry navigated being put on the spot in a superbly Slytherin way. The video was amazing! I love seeing the library nook come to life - how cool! Thanks for all the effort you put into your wonderful stories.
| Title: D Is For Defence, Deception, And Drama
| 14 Nov 2022 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Harry just doesn’t realize what Snape is doing for him - all he can focus on is the past. When he does see what is happening, his attitude will change.
Nice illustration!
Really enjoying this story!
Oooh, the book nook is awesome! I could LIVE in there! You might consider having Harry keep his Invisibility Cloak handy, just in case he needs to flee from Umbridge and "hide in plain sight" in that cozy cubbyhole! Looking forward to seeing how Fifth Year plays out with McGonagall acting from behind the scenes against the pink toad, while Harry and friends are on the front lines. Also, how Harry's apprenticeship might alter his ability to deal directly with Umbridge, and the consequences if he can't keep a low profile. (Like, when had he EVER??!) GREAT CHAPTER!
There was so much to love in this chapter. It makes perfect sense to warn Harry and his classmates about known dangers at the school - that’s the responsible thing for the professors to do, and should have happened in canon. The library nook was amazing - the space, the view, and of course your wonderful visual. Thanks for that! It was also quite poignant for Harry to finally experience the understanding of his friends. That moment put his experiences thus far into perspective. Thanks for this chapter and I’m hoping that Harry maintains the resolve he felt at the chapter’s end! Big thanks again for this wonderful story.
This chapter was amazing, and he imagine of the library was trully great. Continue soon, I can't wait to see Snape reaction to Harry's real life.
Thx for writting this!
Once again a lovely story from you. Thank you!
| Title: Student Apprentice
| 13 Nov 2022 7:06 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for the wonderful picture, it really brought the story to life.
| Title: Dungeon Brewing
| 13 Nov 2022 6:43 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting chapter, especially the encounter with Umbridge
I don't suppose you could come to my house to make a nook like this? Oh, well.
Author's Response: Haha, I can make one for you in Sims 4 or Fortnite Creative, but that's about it :p Otherwise you'll just have to spend a lot of time in this literary nook with Harry.
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