| Title: Dungeon Brewing
| 12 Nov 2022 9:38 pm
|
| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh boy! Umbrage! I can’t wait to see how Snape reacts to her detentions.
Jam-packed with a plethora of details! I felt as if I were right there beside Harry as he struggled to assimilate all the new aspects of his apprenticeship and how they pertained to his position at Hogwarts. And Unbridged to boot... 😳
Thanks for the wonderfully long and eventful chapter! I was beyond pleased to see the new chapter posted. I wonder what change in circumstances will be needed in order to allow Severus to gain more patience and compassion for Harry. Severus seems as irritable and short-tempered as ever - very in-character, though sad to see. I love how Harry’s apprenticeship will change his rules of engagement with a certain odious toad! The potion making aspects in this chapter were great fun to read. Thanks very much for this wonderful update!
I have enjoyed reading this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. =0)
Hmm... Wondering where Hedwig is...and if Snape will allow her to stay with Harry. It's a weird parallel between Vernon and Snape: each is out for himself instead of genuinely wanting to help Harry. Poor Harry is caught in the middle of -- well, not TUG-of-war -- a pushing contest, where each man is trying to push Harry AWAY!!! At least Petunia and Dudley can understand the reality of the situation, so I'm also wondering if that will change their attitude/relationship to Harry.
And the shoe dropped! Wow! I'm still not certain that Vernon comprehends that he lost that round! He certainly doesn't give up, especially when he's got the bit between his teeth...
Awesome opening chapter! I was literally holding my breath during parts, wondering what Vernon was up to, and waiting for the other shoe to drop concerning what would happen to Harry with his relatives acting so abnormal! Little Arla's family seems so normal in comparison! On to Ch. 2, where the shoe may finally hit the floor... 😊
| Title: Preparations
| 07 Nov 2022 9:34 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
That last paragraph was so sad.
Thank you an excellent chapter
| Title: Aconitum
| 07 Nov 2022 9:20 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I find the community and the information fascinating, thank you for the thought and research you have put into it
Harry’s pain and desolation at the end of the chapter was palpable. I hope that he continues to be himself with Snape, and that Snape comes to appreciate who he truly is. It was fun seeing all the extra supplies Harry now needs, and his reaction to them. It will be especially fun to see him become more knowledgeable with the extra studying ahead. I bet Hermione will be jealous, indeed. Thanks for the great update!
|