I think that the potions community, with all the fun characters involved, is a totally fascinating component to your story. I appreciate learning the details of the plants and their properties alongside Harry. The variety of natural settings in which potions ingredient are found also really broadens and enriches your story. I totally love it. Thanks so much for your wonderful updates!
| Title: An Unusual Start To The Summer
| 06 Nov 2022 9:45 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, fantastic start! I absolutely love how decent Vernon is being, and how he is less bothered by magic than Petunia. I imagine part of the reason why Petunia is bothered by magic is because of her sister's death, the Death Eaters, and such too.
I'm really enjoying this story. Fantastic setup and pace! Everyone is really in character, and well-developed. I'm really enjoying this version of Vernon too.
"What does everyone think about the potions community Harry is discovering? Are you all finding the actual potions brewing/ingredient gathering/etc to be too informational, too boring, interesting, or something else?"
Yeah, it's interesting to see these aspects explored!
Me ha encantado este capítulo!!
Thanks so much for the quick update! And thanks also for another excellent chapter. I really hope that Snape’s truth radar (perhaps light legilimency) works on others besides Harry. I’m looking forward to the truth being revealed, forthwith!
I’m loving the mushroom detail in this, as well as the prickly relationship between Harry and Snape.
Definitely looking forward to more.
As always, you have me hooked.
| Title: The Potions Apprentice
| 05 Nov 2022 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Xicheng (Signed)
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Amo esta obra, recién la comencé hoy y ya me he leído todos sus capítulos. 😊
This was a super enjoyable chapter. I loved the mushroom hunting in the highlands, and seeing Harry’s knowledge grow so rapidly through experience. The interactions with the apothecary and the whole sun-culture Harry’s being exposed to is thoroughly fascinating. Thanks, as ever, for a unique and lovely read.
Thanks for your vivid description of Camden Alley, and for the maps that bring it to life spatially. I hope that Snape’s misconceptions of Harry don’t persist too long, especially with the front that Vernon was posing. Thanks for this great chapter.
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