Oh dear the torture scenes are almost too much to bear, but I love the scenes with Severus. Thank you for updating
This was another intense chapter. I wonder how Dumbledore could have let Harry be subjected to this type of Ministry treatment, instead of trying to hide him away somewhere. Though I suppose that Dumbledore has always been rather passive with regards to Harry’s safety. The moments with Snape are truly ones to cherish after all he’s been through. I can only imagine things got worse for Harry after the incident at the chapter’s end.
This is a fascinating story! I can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response: Thanks! It gets... it gets sad... But you know that there is a light at the end of the tunnel!
Poor Harry. 😢
Author's Response: I know... :(
Very interesting thank you
This is dark and heartbreaking, indeed. The time with Snape is a helpful and calming complement to Harry’s time with the Ministry. Thanks for the well written update.
Author's Response: Yeah, I needed to alternate between the two for my own sake. I have to with the darker stories.
Title: Spark
| 27 Nov 2022 10:13 pm
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Poor Harry! Thank you for updating
Title: Kindling
| 27 Nov 2022 9:56 pm
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Very dramatic start thank you
Jeeze, things are turning out horribly for poor Harry.
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