oooh, i love this so far! i like how harry still carries a scar from fighting the basilisk; wonder if it'll get revealed later on. some funny parts here and there, keep up the good work! can't wait for the other chapters come out, tracking this
| Title: Set the Scene
| 11 Dec 2022 12:26 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I laughed aloud over the scone incident, so it was funny to me, thank you.
I loved this story but I do hope you are still going to continue with “No bed of Roses” as it is my favourite story at the moment.
Author's Response: Hi - I'm glad you liked the scone scene -it was fun to write for me too. I originally started writing this last year but never finished in time to post for Christmas. No Bed of Roses will continue as scheduled and the next chapter will be released next month.
The last paragraph made me laugh. An interesting start
I love this version of Snape. Intriguing premise - looking forward to more.
Ooooo I like this!!! Can’t wait for more!
Thanks for a great start to your story. I love the premise of this challenge, and was happy to see your response to it. Even better that your story is mostly written! The warmer, softer Lucius was a nice change from the norm. I’m looking forward to reading on and seeing how the deception plays out.
|