Me encantaba esta historia, cuando dijiste que quedaba un episodio pensé, bueno... sus capítulos son largos, lo conseguirá cerrar todo. Quizá por eso esté tan decepcionada con este, siento que al final de todo, la historia no consiguió avanzar, no sabemos nada de ninguno y había muchas cosas por cerrar. Si decides hacer una secuela estaría bien, porque te permitirá aclarar todo, sino... simplemente me quedaré con que es una historia incompleta, porque así se siente.
Escritura maravillosa eso sí y buena forma de narrar. Siento escribirte en español pero si bien entiendo el idioma, me es difícil expresarme en él.
Loved this story and Snape’s family. If your muse strikes and you want to I agree that a sequel would be lovely.
I really enjoyed reading this story! I liked the fact the Snape did not undergo any drastic changes in his relationships (that would be too fake). I look forward to reading your other works.
Disappointing ending, but otherwise a nice story. It's understandable that Dumbledore would mistrust Remus after learning about his lying by omission. Beatrice didn't seem concerned about Snape at all, unless part of her letter is omitted. I like how Harry was oblivious to what the rest of the Snapes knew. I hope you eventually write a sequel, even if it's just a chapter or two.
I’ve really enjoyed this.
I sincerely hope you’re inspired to write a sequel one day.
Happy 2023.
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| 05 Jan 2023 6:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for completing the story. I love this ending, but would love a sequel of course.
I think the irony of one of Severus’s nieces coming to Hogwarts is delicious, not sure who the other one is but would love Lexi.
Thanks for your super enjoyable story! I do hope you continue on in this universe one day. This was a fun story.
Awwwwww... Thanks, this has been fun. I will be honest and say I'm a little disappointed it ended so quickly without you tying up all the loose ends as you had intended per your note. But thanks for sharing your talent with us!
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