I’m intrigued by the chapter end! There are so many great threads to follow - Snape confronting Harry, Snape’s relatives confronting him, and the mystery at the end. Typical Snape to think that Harry cheated. I really like how you’ve portrayed Snape’s family. It almost feels as if I know them now. Thanks for this update, and I’m looking forward to seeing how all these threads develop!
So many good story lines going! Can’t wait to see Harry get accused of using magic, Snape get accused of abusing Harry, and the conversation between Nana and Harry! And how will Snape react to the wonderful gifts Harry bought for his family? Can’t wait for more!
Title: Get into the Groove
| 23 Dec 2022 9:29 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Wasn't expecting that ending. Really enjoying your story.
I just cackled like a wild woman at that end and cried out "The plot thickens!!"
I'm both thrilled with the update, and upset that there isn't more. I absolutely adore Snape's family and the way they basically took Harry in as one of their own. Should things actually work out, I can easily imagine him growing up along side all of these lovely people.
I know it's only going to get a bit worse before it gets better, but I have to admit I am looking forward to the moment when the ball drops and things start to come to light. Like with how Alfred is starting to get suspicious of Severus' behavior with Harry and that Harry may or may not be abused. I love the little details you put in, it's so.. ugh it's just so good.
Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go pretend like I'm working for a few more hours. Have a WONDERFUL day, and Merry whatever you celebrate this Holiday season.
Title: Upstaged
| 21 Dec 2022 12:28 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to see Harry getting one over Severus! Loved the lunch preparation and the final scene was a real surprise thank you
Ohhhhh what’s nextttt, i wanna knowww
Lol! That was some kick : D
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Poor Harry. He is trying so hard. Another entertaining and well written chapter.
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