| Title: Doxy Trouble
| 05 Feb 2023 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a novel start
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Oh no, I wouldn’t trust Dung! I like how you’ve portrayed Harry’s everyday comfort with Grimmauld. It’s a nice start to your story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah Dung is not...the best source for things, as Harry will learn.
Oh, dear. I feel a disaster coming on.
Author's Response: Ha, you may be right! Thanks for reading :)
Never accept anything from Fletcher. He sold me a cauldron once, and I never noticed it was incredibly thin, and tried to brew a potion. The bottom melted, and the contents made my skin erupt in boils.
Author's Response: Ouch, Draco! You learned that lesson the hard way! Never trust Mundungus :)
Oh Mundungus. He really shouldn't be trusted. You did a good job with his accent. And Harry is very much in character. :) Good start.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! Accents can be so tricky to write.
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