This is really fun and fascinating! I’m looking forward to seeing how this master-servant relationship goes. Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words--fun and fascinating (with a dose of angst) is exactly what I was going for.
Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
This is not good for Harry at all! I wonder if the draught was given to him on purpose. I also wonder why no one has questioned Dung. Thank goodness for Hermione. I’m looking forward to the Harry-Snape interaction that will come from all this.
Author's Response: Harry is going to struggle for a while. Oh yes there will be plenty of Harry-Snape in the coming chapters. Thanks for reading!
I suspect that Harry is being overly optimistic. Good for Hermione making him go to the hospital wing. I wonder when he would have gone otherwise. Thanks for another good chapter.
Author's Response: Lol yes, Harry doesn't quite know what he's in for. Hermione absolutely had the right idea here.
Oh no, I wouldn’t trust Dung! I like how you’ve portrayed Harry’s everyday comfort with Grimmauld. It’s a nice start to your story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah Dung is not...the best source for things, as Harry will learn.
| Title: The Draught of Asphodel
| 26 Jan 2023 3:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Yikes! Poor Harry. He's honestly really lucky that Hermione figured it out. Really lucky. If she hadn't been around, would Hrry have died before anyone else did figure it out?
I do think Harry was well within his rights to throw stuff at the news. Nice to see realistic portrayals of a teenaged boy.
Author's Response: If no one had figured it out then yeah he would have died. This is a very gnarly potion. Lol--I'm glad you liked him throwing stuff! He deserves to throw things after such awful news.
| Title: The Draught of Asphodel
| 26 Jan 2023 4:25 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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Poor Harry. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Yes, absolutely poor Harry. Thank you for reading!
| Title: The Draught of Asphodel
| 26 Jan 2023 4:25 am
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Poor Harry. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
The next question is whether or not Mundungus knew what he had and deliberately infected Harry.
Author's Response: Hm, good question! Thanks for reading!
I'm glad to see this story on here! I've read it before but no longer have access to other fanfiction sites due to an internet filter!
Author's Response: Ulgh that's a pain! Glad you found it here!
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