Yikes! Oh no, poor Harry. And the loss of the potion too. Yikes.
I loved this chapter. Severus channeling his father and breaking down, and Harry trying to comfort him was sweet. The snake plush is so cute.
Your Harry is adorable and very much in character. The snark and humor of both is spot on. Well done. I hope Harry is okay. The independence need of toddlers really got the best of them.
Thanks for the nice, long update! It was a fun chapter.
| Title: Toddler Troubles
| 21 Feb 2023 8:15 pm
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Lovely description of a day with a toddler! Thank you
| Title: Accident in the Classroom
| 21 Feb 2023 7:52 pm
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Thank you a very entertaining first chapter. I love their interaction.
Oh dear. I would have liked to do such a task on my own as well, as I am not incompetent, but Severus knows what he's doing.
Oh no! Poor Harry! Great update.
Thank you for the news chapter!
| Title: Accident in the Classroom
| 02 Feb 2023 9:27 pm
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Loved the battle of wills they had! Good thing he didn’t feed the formula potion to the baby as under one’s should not have honey.
Thank you for a lovely start to the story
Author's Response: For a 200 year old potion recipe book, it was definitely outdated. Thanks for reading and leaving kind words. I'm really having fun with this story. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Argh! It feels like weeks since I read this first chapter, and I'm DYING for an update... Then I realize it's only been a few days🤦🏼r05;a92;a039;
Author's Response: So sorry, life is against me having any time to sit down and work on my stories. It's so hard! But I love this one and can't wait to get these next chapters up. Enjoy the next one and thank you for leaving kind words!
Author's Response: So sorry, life is against me having any time to sit down and work on my stories. It's so hard! But I love this one and can't wait to get these next chapters up. Enjoy the next one and thank you for leaving kind words!
Author's Response: So sorry, life is against me having any time to sit down and work on my stories. It's so hard! But I love this one and can't wait to get these next chapters up. Enjoy the next one and thank you for leaving kind words!
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