Interesting story so far. Poor Harry and Ben. Snape’s summer persona is definitely out of character but I can accept that. Obviously all that reading you’ve done for years is a benefit to your writing. This is an excellent story for first timer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Each and everyone makes me happy. Snape'll definitely get more into character when he meets Harry ;)
| Title: Summer Storm
| 09 Apr 2023 5:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry and Ben. I hope Severus can show the same compassion to Harry as he has forBen. I realise I’m assuming of course that Harry finds Severus! Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Yes, you may assume ;)But until that happens, there are some adventures to be had for all of them.
This was a great chapter! It was harrowing for both boys, and the parallels between them were nicely portrayed. Thanks for updating your story.
Author's Response: Thank you :) It will get even more harrowing, I'm afraid, but something good will come from it. Have a nice week!
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