| Title: On the Road
| 05 Jun 2023 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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That was very underhand of Dumbledore! However it will probably get the result he wants. Thank you for the update
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting :)
Great chapter! The part with Harry at the pharmacy was hilarious. I’m guessing that Dumbledore definitely manipulated Snape into trying harder. I enjoyed both threads of the two boys and like how you’re fitting together the puzzle pieces.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I didn't really plan to have to fit together so much pieces, it just happened. I'm struggling a bit with that but it also gives wonderful opportunities for writing scenes like the pharmacy. You were the only one who commented on that btw :)
Oh, Dumbledore, you sly old devil.
Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Guess I'm just using Dumbledore's mischievousness a bit too much for the story ;)
If Dumbledore was bothered by Snape’s treatment of Harry, why didn’t he confront him right away about it? I would think a Slytherin like Severus would recognize Dumbledore’s manipulation here. I’m curious what’s next. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Mmh, maybe Dumbledore realised just now how bad the mistreatment is what with Severus just losing Harry's trace. And for Severus recognizing the manipulation: I think he was really upset over being called "pathetic". Just look at how he reacted to Harry calling him a coward. I guess, Slytherins are clever and cunning but also their emotional side sometimes makes them a bit blind ;)
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