I’m feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.
Wonderful.
This a truly wonderful story! You did an excellent job! There was only one thing that puzzled me, and that was Harry’s obvious familiarity with the Burrow and Arthur Weasley’s familiarity with Harry! It puzzled me because I was under the impression this was set at the end of Harry’s first year and so Harry wouldn’t have ever been to the Burrow or been around Arthur except hearing about it and him through Ron and the other Weasley kids! It in no way distracted from the story, I assure you, and I enjoyed Arthur and Severus’ interactions very much! You should definitely continue with this as a series or a sequel!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 May 2023 8:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending to the story thank you
This chapter was totally beautiful. Although I never like a good story to end, this did feel like the fitting place to do so. Thanks so much for sharing.
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