| Title: Chapter 2
| 23 Jun 2023 8:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great start to the story
Riveting start to your story! I love your writing style, and am looking forward to reading on.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 May 2023 4:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very unusual and excellent start to the story. I hope Severus has some drinks in his bag Harry is going to be very dehydrated soon.
What a fabulous start!!!
I love any and every “Snape kidnap/Runs away with Harry” and you seem on top of it!
Can’t wait for more!!!
Author's Response: That is also one of my favorite tropes, as you can probably see, lol! Thanks for reviewing!
I guess that's a printing option: but I can view and read it fine.
Just figured out that I can read chapter 1 by opening the whole fic: if you open chapter 2, at the top right you're given an option to choose "Chapter or Story." If you click on "Story," chapter 1 will show up.
Author's Response: You beautiful, beautiful human being! Thank you so much! I hand't thought of that.
As with the other readers, I cannot view Chapter 1, although it is listed with a word count and everything.
Despite that, Chapter 2 was cool and the story looks interesting! Looking forward to more!
Even without seeing the first chapter, you have me hooked. Interesting start
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Someone pointed out that you can view the first chapter in print view.
Yeah, the 1st chapter is completely blank on my end, and when I try to click the chapter link it brings me to the story description page. :(
I can’t see the first chapter either, but am looking forward to reading your story when it’s up!
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