I loved the chapter end! It was funny and tender. I’m always excited to see your updates.
Their relationship is just getting better and better! I'm really sorry about the Weasleys, though.
In this chapter, I see there's a 'next' option, but when I tap it, only the word 'By' is written. Maybe it's some kind of a glitch?
Awwwww, what a lovely line to end on!
Thanks for updating. This is the fic I'm following most keenly at the moment.
I’m totally hooked on this and looking forward to more.
Oh dear! That was a great chapter but a horrible ending!!!
Nice transition from bucolic to terror.
Oh! Oh no! I hope Harry doesn't down himself in guilt!
I enjoyed the interaction between the two boys and seeing Severus so subtly thoughtful in his own way towards Harry. It was also fun seeing their backstory being probed. I wonder if anyone will suspect that something is amiss. Thanks for updating!
| Title: Chapter 15
| 19 Jun 2023 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Nemo (Signed)
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I enjoyed reading about the two boys going for a swim. It’s really hot here right now and I could just imagine the ocean. Thank you!
Also, Severus’ small gestures of comfort to Harry were really well written. I liked how he tried to justify them with keeping up appearances :)
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