I love that you’re making familiar scenes feel unique and substantive! For example, you went a step farther than most typically do in having Snape second-guess his new instincts about Harry’s behavior. The clothes shopping was also full of great moments, including Harry’s musings afterwards. And I still think it’s so cool that you have Harry thinking about The Art of War. Thanks so much for the great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm considering making this a series and starting another work for Harry's Art of War notes + Snape's additions. It wouldn't be a story, just the notes, but it seems like a waste to just leave all of my art of war side content forever buried in my google doc
I loved so many things about this chapter - Harry meeting a kid his age, and of course his opening up to Snape. I loved how Snape used his name. Thanks so much for updating!!
That conversation was really sad. Shows how much Harry's childhood still bothered him
That conversation was really sad. Shows how much Harry's childhood still bothered him
Aw, this was a great chapter! I've been waiting for Harry to start talking about the Dursleys. Loved Snape saying Harry's first name.
Every email that you’ve updated makes my day.
Every email that you’ve updated makes my day.
Every email that you’ve updated makes my day.
I'm very interested to see where this story goes next. Thanks for updating it!
I'm very interested to see where this story goes next. Thanks for updating it!
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