Oh, how terrible for Harry to have to watch a relationship he could have had, with just one different choice? This is heartbreaking!
| Title: Confessions
| 21 Jun 2023 7:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter and Alium Harry is of course right someone should have done something. Thank you for your wonderful portrayal f this world
Author's Response: You're too kind. Thank you!
Wow, this dialogue was so perfectly angsty and compassionate. I loved your explanation of why it had to be Snape. This is amazing!
Great conversation between the two Harrys.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's nice to hear, particularly as it is one of my least favourite chapters.
I love how this is going!
There's a little glitch, though: I'd this chapter 2 or Chapter 3? If I try to get to "next chapter" from the Chapter 1 page, it goes to a blank screen. I can open this current chapter from the list, which shows it as Chapter 2, yet the heading on this page says Chapter 3?
The print view only shows 2 chapters.
Thank you!
Author's Response: I know, I have made the site admin aware. Just waiting for them to get back to me. There are three chapters posted, and I can see them all to read through using 'Next' but I can't get to chapter 2 from the main page.
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