Woah, I didn't connect the name lol 🙈
Woo, so excited there's more! I loved it!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Binte! It's always especially nice when one of the discord lot comments. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Nice ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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| 21 Jun 2023 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for the story, and the promise of a sequel. Can’t wait to read it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! It'll likely be a while before it's finished, as it's a lot longer than the first part.
I really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: I'm pleased to learn that. Thanks for letting me know! :-)
I loved this story! The universe you’ve created has totally drawn me in. Your characterizations were really compelling. The Alium was also such a cool concept. Any hints on the name of the site where more chapters are posted? I couldn’t readily find it, and I’m hooked on your story! Thanks so much for letting us know there’s a sequel in the works that’s more standard Severitus! I look forward to reading more of your story anon.
Author's Response: Thank you, you've been very generous with your praise and it made me smile so much!
I'm surprised you couldn't find it; it pops right up for me if I Google the words Alium and Severitus. Fair warning, the stuff on here is a little more polished than the ones on there; I tend to edit slightly before I copy stuff across to here.
That was great! I am excited to hear there will be a sequel, though the prospect of having to be patient is rather daunting...
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I might get the sequel finished over the summer, perhaps. Life is less busy then.
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