Wow! When I caught this on the "Story of the Moment", I had no idea how much I'd get into it, given the fact that it's been about 5 years since the last update. However, I loved it! Actually, make that: LOVE it-- since I hope you'll consider continuing the story after having had a break! :-D Seriously, one of your major strengths is drawing your readers into the story-- an amazing feat to do it SO WELL in chapters this short! Your focus remains tightly upon action and emotion, and that drives your train at high speed, while your audience can only hang on for the ride, wondering where you're taking them next! /// Just as an aside, I noticed that many of your early reviewers are different from those who are currently actively reviewing; also, there are many new members (more than 400 more since I joined in Sept 2009!) who would be interested in your story! It has SO MUCH POTENTIAL! Please consider giving it (& us) another shot! Thanks!
I had read this a while back and lost it, so with surprise I've discovered it again. Course their isn't a new chapter but atleast now I can keep my eye on it.
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