Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Reconditioning
Title: Story Text 04 Sep 2023 4:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very interesting, well written and new type of story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Story Text 02 Sep 2023 2:18 am
Reviewer: OutriderIvyHill (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this. The writing style really captured the intensity and emotion of the moment, and the idea of Harry's emotions interfering with his potions is intriguing. I would like to see a sequel, maybe? About Harry learning more Occlumency and forming a better working relationship with Snape, perhaps? If not, that's okay. If you do, however, please let me know :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am planning on a sequel, but it'll probably take very, very long lol!
Title: Audio Links 31 Aug 2023 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot how much I enjoyed audiobooks!

    Author's Response: Yayyy! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Story Text 30 Aug 2023 12:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful story! I really like how you developed the plot with occlumency and potions. The explanation Snape gave about clearing one’s mind that led to Harry’s breakthrough was fascinating. And I absolutely love Harry’s burgeoning interest in potions! Thanks again for the terrific read, and so glad there’s a sequel that could be coming at some point!

    Author's Response: Aww thank you for your lovely words! And I'm glad you'd like a sequel!
Title: Story Text 29 Aug 2023 12:49 pm
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait... That's the end? I want mooooore...

    Thank you!

    Author's Response: You're in luck! I've been planning a a sequel (if you can wait a few years, maybe more 😂) And thanks for that lovely compliment 🥰
Title: Story Text 28 Aug 2023 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is FANTASTC!

    I love that Harry is so obsessed with potions and trying to figure out what went wrong. And I adore that Snape is trying to figure it out too.

    Working through the night is easy to do.

    Good point bringing up Harry's old traumatic memories. it makes sense that Occlumency would bring them back up. Harry definitely has complex post traumatic stress syndrome.

    Your Snape is so much in character. Fabulous job. Harry is in character and done really well too.

    The whip Umbridge used on Harry was extreme. I guess she poinsoned him? Or was it just an infection from wounds he couldn't see?

    In any case, I'm glad that Umbride was kicked out of Hogwarts. I guess it was Poppy and Snape that did it. Maybe with help of McGonagall and Dumbledore.

    It's cute that Harry's new favorite class is Potions. And how he feels when Snape approves. Nice ending.

    I'm really glad that Snape finally taught Harry how to clear his mind, and in ways that Harry could understand. Flying. Inspired. See Snape can be a good teacher if he really tries.

    I loved this story. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it!

    Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! And thank you for that absolutely amazing review!

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