Aww, that was sweet! I'm sad Harry lost the game though :(
| Title: Quidditch and Quietude
| 19 Sep 2023 11:51 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Poor Harry and all of Gryffindor. They really lost spectacularly. I wonder if the Slytherin team took Liquid Luck before the game. It's unusual for anyone to beat Harry to the snitch.
And with such bad weather, it makes me think they need umbrellas just to walk back to the castle. Being cold and wet is miserable. It makes the warm castle and drinks all the more inviting though.
Madame Hooch gestured for both teams to get into their stating positions.
starting
When doing dialogue, a comma replaces periods. So:
“I’m goin’ to Sev’s.” Harry muttered to Ron.
“I’m goin’ to Sev’s,” Harry muttered to Ron.
“Hello, Harry.” Snape said.
“Hello, Harry,” Snape said.
“Complete crap.” Harry muttered.
“Complete crap,” Harry muttered.
Such a sweet ending. I really loved the hominess and coziness. I love a caring Snape.
Thanks so much for writing and sharing your work. It was a pleasure to read.
| Title: Quidditch and Quietude
| 19 Sep 2023 7:15 am
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| Reviewer: krosi (Signed)
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Loved this! Such a sweet family moment for these two. I like how causal they are in the absence of staff and students and they can just relax and enjoy the other’s presence after a long day. Just perfect.
| Title: Quidditch and Quietude
| 12 Sep 2023 10:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely warm story
Awww. That was totally fluffylicious.
Awww, this was sweet and, indeed, cozy and heart-warming. Loved the setting and idea and of course that nice bit of Severus taking care of Harry's injuries at the end.
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