I’m really liking where this is going and looking forward to more.
| Title: Out after Curfew
| 12 Oct 2023 7:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very tense chapter thank you
| Title: Harry's Plan
| 12 Oct 2023 7:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter thank you
greatly enjoying so far! lovely story
Yikes! Some tense moments here. An excellent chapter
Oh dear, Harry. That didn’t go to plan.
I hope you don’t mind me pointing it out, but a ‘fitful sleep’ means Snape kept waking up/didn’t sleep well, which is, I think, the opposite of what happened.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! Thanks for pointing this out. I'm not a native speaker and that phrase must be one I remembered wrong and never noticed it! Until now :)
It does make much more sense the way you put it. Sorry for the confusion. I'll correct that in the story. Thanks for all your reviews!
Well, Harry tried...
Author's Response: He sure did... :-)
And he won't give up now...
| Title: An Unlikely Conversation
| 21 Sep 2023 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an insightful chapter
| Title: Sirius
| 21 Sep 2023 6:07 pm
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Very good description of Severus and the workings of an animagus mind thank you
| Title: Double Potions
| 21 Sep 2023 5:58 pm
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Excellent and unusual start to the story thank you
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