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Reviews For Caught Between
Oh no! Poor Ron and Harry. A very angst chapter very well done
When Harry though tabout the people who cared about him, he only mentioned Ron. What about Hermione? Ron and Hermione both care about Harry, right? In fact, Hermione showed more care than Ron through canon.
The Death Eaters attacking Hogsmeade was a surprise. Yikes!
Oh no, not Ron! Dang, this story took a dark turn really fast. I was not expecting that at all.
I'm glad that Snape was there to protect Harry and comfort him though. Harry is still just a kid.
I hope Snape notices the glass and the wound Harry has, and is mindful of not pressing it in deeper accidentally with the comfort he is giving.
Wow this was an intense chapter. Well written though, good pace. But poor Ron. Poor Mrs. Weasley and the other Weasleys and Hermione and all the teachers. Who else died? At least Hermione is okay. |
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