I usually don’t cry with stories but this really was sad. You made me feel Harry’s pain.
Oh no, not again! I can’t take too many of these.
I really like these parts with Ron.
Mrs. Weasley was so heartless, even if she is grieving. It’s so sweet that Ron is still helping Harry.
Draco’s being strangely helpful, and wow Hermione. I didn’t expect such vitriol from her.
I wonder why Harry doesn’t want to see the Weasley family or Hermione.
Ok wow, I definitely wasn’t expecting that.
Great chapter! I loved how Harry felt protected by Snape. That’s progress, indeed.
It feels realistic that the first sessions would go exactly as you’ve penned them.
Interesting start to your story!
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