What a chapter end! I’m glad that’s out in the open, but hoping they can recover from this set back.
This had all the good feels at the end in the perfect doses. Ack, meddlesome, manipulative Dumbles.
Lovely, so glad Harry apologized.
I hope Harry apologizes. That would go a long way. I like the tension you’ve created between his old and newly growing perspectives.
I love the meaning and visuals of the intertwined magic - simply lovely. Leif and Alexei are such cool characters!
I loved this chapter! So good!
I love your two new characters - who they are, their back stories, and what they perceive about magic. So cool!
Yep, Dumbledore’s a manipulative cur. I like the journals and the diversity of experiences they’re having together.
That was a lovely chapter. It feels like a turning point. I’m in this for the long haul! Thanks so much for all the great chapters ahead.
I’d call that progress. Thanks for making their relationship change slow and believable.
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