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Title: Chapter 5 21 Dec 2023 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh dear you don't like Harry to have his friends. I can understand it as a plot device but Harry needs his friends and although it's good that he turns to Severus he also needs Ron and Hermione. This is just my opinion and I don't mind for one story but it is every story.

     Having said that this is a brilliant story and I love it



    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story regardless and I respect your opinion, but Harry will still have friends and does always have other friends in my stories. I don't do this because I don't like to Harry to have his friends; I just prefer to explore other characters and the relationships Harry can have with them instead. Ron and Hermione don't have to be the only people he's ever friends with. He should have been closer to others in canon, in my opinion. In this one, as I've said, he's going to become good friends with Draco and Luna instead. Fanfiction is typically AU in some respect for a reason. I'm not the only one to frequently exchange Ron and Hermione for other characters. Ron and Hermione aren't the only other characters that exist that can be Harry's friends. Sorry. *shrugs*

Title: Chapter 5 19 Dec 2023 4:20 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so glad that everyone heard Ron’s diatribe - he can’t hide from his words now.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Dec 2023 10:08 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that RONALD WEASLEY! shriek will be reverberating through my head for the rest of the day.
    Good stuff.
Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2023 5:05 am
Reviewer: randomausfulloffluff (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaah so good!
Title: Chapter 4 07 Dec 2023 8:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Very informative I loved their lessons in the park, thank you

Title: Chapter 4 06 Dec 2023 3:28 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]

    I like how you explained the training Snape is giving Harry.

Title: Chapter 4 05 Dec 2023 1:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m enjoying this foray into different types of magic. Great story. Please do post more!
Title: Chapter 4 05 Dec 2023 1:36 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m really loving how comfortable they’re becoming with each other.
Title: Chapter 3 05 Dec 2023 1:31 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the clever repartee between Harry and Snape. Though I’m left with a sense of foreboding by the chapter’s end.
Title: Chapter 3 05 Dec 2023 1:28 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m really enjoying this and looking forward to more.

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