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Reviews For Dear Diary: The Freak Under the Stairs
BRO I DONT EVEN LIKE. KNOW WHAT TO SAY LMAO
This is great! I love the way you have Harry internalize his external world.
I love the way the diary isn't just a focal point, it's a fulcrum that everything revolves around and that creates it's own leverage on otherwise minor emotions.
Also, you did such a great job keeping the tone if a youngster, which gives the dark intermingling with it so much more punch.
And the accretion of stressors is really well managed.
Wow. love it all!
I’m totally hooked.
It is just as powerful the second time reading. Holy - Merlin's balls this is so real. How did Harry loose it- how did Snape get it? Did he steal it when Harry was zoned out? Great use of italics, and statements from Harry's thoughts, the repetition. I liked your Neville too. Snape is spot on. I am so nervous for Harry right now. Please tell me you have more written. |
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