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Reviews For Acceptance
Woah I love this. Harry is a delightful 11 year old, in character version of himself. Snape is just obviously overwhelmed. You write everyone so well. I hope Snape gets better at this parenting thing soon. I'm surprised that Harry isn't just melting down over and over again, but I suppose he is conditioned to put up with bad situations.
Love it!
I love their communications, I don't think they are having a conversation yet, Severus's thought are very funny. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you! This is really my first attempt at humor in writing so I'm glad it's working!
Author's Response: It's going to take awhile for Snape to process. He's very good at avoiding. Lol. I'm very excited about the next chapter and hope you'll enjoy it as well. I'm not not very good at writing comedy. Lol. Most of my attempts have been with others who did the heavy lifting. I'm pretty proud of myself for this story, I'll be honest. Even if some chapters later on are a little less humorous. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I love that cake moment! I'm very proud that I wrote it. Lol! Poppy Pomfrey is less happy, but I feel like that would make both Snape and Harry happy. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I love that cake moment! I'm very proud that I wrote it. Lol! Poppy Pomfrey is less happy, but I feel like that would make both Snape and Harry happy. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I love that cake moment! I'm very proud that I wrote it. Lol! Poppy Pomfrey is less happy, but I feel like that would make both Snape and Harry happy. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I love Snape's confusion over what to do! Author's Response: Me too!! It was so fun to write as well! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I love Snape's confusion over what to do!
Author's Response: It's coming soon, i promise! |
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